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Post by Colter on Jul 12, 2014 23:51:31 GMT -5
Updated 7/24/20Any and all feedback is not only welcomed; it's allowed.
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Post by Jack on Jul 13, 2014 2:18:51 GMT -5
Not bad for the first in a few months man.
-Work on the stiffness by utilising the movements of the joints in Ortons legs. -Try and prevent the slidy feel of the feet. -Also try and work on fidgetyness, like in the sell, you could have deleted some pictures here and there by looking back through your pictures and noticing not everything is moving in the right direction.
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Post by Colter on Jul 13, 2014 2:22:33 GMT -5
Not bad for the first in a few months man. -Work on the stiffness by utilising the movements of the joints in Ortons legs. -Try and prevent the slidy feel of the feet. -Also try and work on fidgetyness, like in the sell, you could have deleted some pictures here and there by looking back through your pictures and noticing not everything is moving in the right direction. Definite thanks for the feedback, Jack. I'll work on these next time. Trying to get more active again.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2014 4:17:55 GMT -5
Jericho took a Rikishi bump.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2014 21:51:49 GMT -5
LARIATO!!!! not gonna comment on the discus lariat tho.
Sonic Boom: The animation was quite choppy and really should've had some smoothening pictures, speed was crazy and un-realistic, just like the actual animation, joint movement was largely non-existent, they moved a wee bit in the move but stayed stiff, the impact was once again non-existent, Cara and Punk landed in the table and then fidgeted around for 3 pictures then it ended, the reaction was just like the impact and joint movement, non-existent, lighting was pretty good but I saw some string, the camera wasn't too shaky but should've been tightened more. The effort was there for such a tough, crazy animation but overall could've been a whole lot better, I wouldn't consider it a 3 or 4/10, moreso a 1.5/10 for effort. Fin.
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Post by Colter on Jul 13, 2014 22:19:00 GMT -5
LARIATO!!!! not gonna comment on the discus lariat tho. Sonic Boom: The animation was quite choppy and really should've had some smoothening pictures, speed was crazy and un-realistic, just like the actual animation, joint movement was largely non-existent, they moved a wee bit in the move but stayed stiff, the impact was once again non-existent, Cara and Punk landed in the table and then fidgeted around for 3 pictures then it ended, the reaction was just like the impact and joint movement, non-existent, lighting was pretty good but I saw some string, the camera wasn't too shaky but should've been tightened more. The effort was there for such a tough, crazy animation but overall could've been a whole lot better, I wouldn't consider it a 3 or 4/10, moreso a 1.5/10 for effort. Fin. Thanks for the feedback, Josh. I'm actually going to retry the Sonic Boom in the next day or two, as I wasn't too keen on the finished product. Thanks again.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2014 22:22:20 GMT -5
It seems like Punk is flying, literally.
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Post by Justin on Jul 13, 2014 22:33:36 GMT -5
9.9/10 best animator on the board and I will go as far to call you the Elvis of wrestling figure animation.
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Post by Colter on Jul 13, 2014 22:46:43 GMT -5
9.9/10 best animator on the board and I will go as far to call you the Elvis of wrestling figure animation. How many steroids did you pump into that rating to beef it up that much? I'll take the Elvis part, though.
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Post by slappy on Aug 12, 2014 22:20:26 GMT -5
They are all good but they'd be great if the string wasn't visible.
Fix that and you get a 20/10.
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Post by TheSystem 1.5 on Jul 26, 2016 14:13:28 GMT -5
Good stuff Doug.
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Post by Daws on Jul 26, 2016 17:36:28 GMT -5
Nice job Doug!
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Post by Sizzle on Jul 26, 2016 22:47:25 GMT -5
I liked it. I'm not a good animator at all, but that's really good, although it coulD have slightly more reactions from both guys.
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Post by Colter on Jul 28, 2016 15:54:47 GMT -5
Thanks everyone for the recent feedback. Any suggestions as to what I should animate?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2016 7:21:10 GMT -5
Smothering the cover of a '69 summer Played through a speaker of fuzz Nobody knew Bryan Adams wasn't cool The TV just told me he was Always heard the sound Get me out of this town Resonating clear in my head That's what it's all about mate...instead of just being someone who tops his thread with banal content...good on you. Hope all is good with you mate.
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Post by Colter on Sept 2, 2016 21:02:39 GMT -5
Smothering the cover of a '69 summer Played through a speaker of fuzz Nobody knew Bryan Adams wasn't cool The TV just told me he was Always heard the sound Get me out of this town Resonating clear in my head That's what it's all about mate...instead of just being someone who tops his thread with banal content...good on you. Hope all is good with you mate. Thanks mate. Just updated the thread with all the vignettes done for SPW so far.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 19, 2016 2:27:47 GMT -5
That's what it's all about mate...instead of just being someone who tops his thread with banal content...good on you. Hope all is good with you mate. Thanks mate. Just updated the thread with all the vignettes done for SPW so far. I saw, and commented in the chat thread here, but it bears repeating in some fashion. I'm likely quite a bit older than you, and concede that the talent to do all of what you do is immense...at least I think so. Good on you for sharing what you do and for always being positive where you can. Not to bring it down but I've got so many neuroses about things, mainly people here, so I have no choice but to retreat. I've mentioned this to you before in some capacity...I'm not content with simply 'writing a text fed'. I'm also not going to top my thread with banalities. I've created a world. I want to explore that world in the ways that mean the most to me, because essentially the best thing is to 'write about what you know'. Even if that means wrestling itself is not the priority. The flip side here is animation for you; it's something you enjoy and you're good at. Same goes for my long lost friend Wicked and GWV. I'm biased; I think it's the best pic fed I've ever seen. Your animations and what you're doing with SPW are very intriguing Colter. Well done, and thank you.
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Post by dylan on Jun 25, 2020 1:07:38 GMT -5
Looks good. Love the commentary, and love that juicy ass even more
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Post by Colter on Jul 24, 2020 4:11:49 GMT -5
Got rid of all my posts in this thread saying "bump", don't want anyone to waste their time going through 3 pages of that post when everything is tidy in the OP. From now on, I'll be updating the thread with the newest animation in a new post and also adding it to the OP. I'll start with these, since I hadn't put them in the OP before I wrote this post.
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Post by jkennedy81 on Jul 24, 2020 18:07:20 GMT -5
Awesome work i subscribed
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