Carreiras4
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Post by Carreiras4 on Apr 21, 2014 9:50:46 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2014 10:25:03 GMT -5
Good job! But i didn't like the camera angle, the entrance was also a bit fidgety.
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Post by Slim on Apr 21, 2014 12:17:25 GMT -5
Nice job man! Maybe a bit stiff for the jump. Is it his new titantron or a custom titantron?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2014 13:30:20 GMT -5
It was a bit jumpy in places, but I really liked it. Nice job man! The only thing I'd suggest is maybe having the camera zoomed in just a little bit, so he doesn't look so far away, but as I said, nice job! |
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Post by RollinsFan44 on Apr 21, 2014 14:10:27 GMT -5
Pretty good, though I agree with most about the jump being fidgety also try and get a closer camera angle next time.
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Post by IWFAnimation on Apr 21, 2014 16:23:29 GMT -5
This is a really good animation. The only things that bugged me was the camera angle (try to have it zoomed in or have the camera at a lower elevation. I'm guessing that the camera was on a tripod and the arena set was on the ground) and the stiffness around the jump. If the titantron was custom then props to you man! That was a great titantron |
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Carreiras4
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Post by Carreiras4 on Apr 22, 2014 11:54:50 GMT -5
I found The Titantron on youtube, not custom
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Post by Deleted on Apr 24, 2014 13:40:40 GMT -5
cool ! ! ! it is a little choppy but overall it was pretty neat nice work!
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Post by Cooperman on Apr 24, 2014 21:09:21 GMT -5
The entrance was fine overall. I like how you did exactly CM Punk's moves instead of just having random taunts. It's good that you had the titantron on the stage and the crowd shot was a good touch. The flow was okay, but a bit of fidgetiness and choppiness distracted me. Make sure to take more pictures next time. Also, one of the main cons was the angle - it was too high and was a big letdown. Test a lot of angles and make sure your cam is low enough.
Keep up the good efforts, I see improvement.
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Post by IWFAnimation on Apr 24, 2014 22:34:03 GMT -5
awww... if the titantron was custom then I would've said that you got editing skills
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Post by Carreiras4 on Apr 25, 2014 17:29:22 GMT -5
The entrance was fine overall. I like how you did exactly CM Punk's moves instead of just having random taunts. It's good that you had the titantron on the stage and the crowd shot was a good touch. The flow was okay, but a bit of fidgetiness and choppiness distracted me. Make sure to take more pictures next time. Also, one of the main cons was the angle - it was too high and was a big letdown. Test a lot of angles and make sure your cam is low enough. Keep up the good efforts, I see improvement. Thanks Coop. I appreciate your comments, it's motivating receive this comments |
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