DCW:Attitude Episode 1 Part 1

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Let me know if you like or not and don't be a douche

[wwextreme25]

Honestly, I really like your commentary. Most people struggle and stutter ith what to say but you seem to flow well. The animation could use some work. Taking more pictures by moving the figures in smaller movements, will help get a smoother and more fluid outcome to your animation so maybe work on that for your next. ALso, i noticed your camera seemed to jerk around alot in the animation. Make sure before you animate, it's as sturdy as possible because it an flaw the animation a lot with an unsteady camera.
YOUR MARKOUT FOR DDP OMG, made me lol haha. Nice job there, the titantron greenscreen you had going on, shouldve carried on behind DDP when he showed though not just on a still frame imo. But nice touch!

The diamond cutter needed a lot more work i think to look more realistic. Watch the move on youtube, slow it down frame by frame, and really take notice on the joint movements etc to then replicate with your figure frame by frame as your diamond cutter was stiff (meaning the joints didnt move accordingly to gravity) and was choppy - more pics needed to be taken.

With the crowd movements, try and again, take more pictures and get that smooth as it looks like a few frames, thats just replayed.

Also saw string in parts, such as the michaels entrance. Try and edit that (i recommend photoshop/photofiltre) to try edit out the things that shouldnt be there as it looks unrealistic.

The match ending how it did wasnt the greatest ever, as there was a slap, a flip, and then a long commercial so maybe look on animating a bit more before taking a break. Just keep practising man and you'll get there.

[Slim]

Agree with Rob.
Cool job! It was really stiff and very choppy and you also have to put reactions. So, take A LOT of pictures and move the joints AFTER EVERY pictures.

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Apr 12, 2014 15:20:14 GMT -5 wwextreme25 said:

Honestly, I really like your commentary. Most people struggle and stutter ith what to say but you seem to flow well. The animation could use some work. Taking more pictures by moving the figures in smaller movements, will help get a smoother and more fluid outcome to your animation so maybe work on that for your next. ALso, i noticed your camera seemed to jerk around alot in the animation. Make sure before you animate, it's as sturdy as possible because it an flaw the animation a lot with an unsteady camera.
YOUR MARKOUT FOR DDP OMG, made me lol haha. Nice job there, the titantron greenscreen you had going on, shouldve carried on behind DDP when he showed though not just on a still frame imo. But nice touch!

The diamond cutter needed a lot more work i think to look more realistic. Watch the move on youtube, slow it down frame by frame, and really take notice on the joint movements etc to then replicate with your figure frame by frame as your diamond cutter was stiff (meaning the joints didnt move accordingly to gravity) and was choppy - more pics needed to be taken.

With the crowd movements, try and again, take more pictures and get that smooth as it looks like a few frames, thats just replayed.

Also saw string in parts, such as the michaels entrance. Try and edit that (i recommend photoshop/photofiltre) to try edit out the things that shouldnt be there as it looks unrealistic.

The match ending how it did wasnt the greatest ever, as there was a slap, a flip, and then a long commercial so maybe look on animating a bit more before taking a break. Just keep practising man and you'll get there.

Thanks I appreciate the response. And honestly I was lazy and time was a problem for me because I filmed that at like 3:00 am and I was putting together the Shawn Michaels vs Dolph Ziggler match the same day I was supposed to upload the video. And ill try to make part 2 like the way you pointed out.