underjohngrohs
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Post by underjohngrohs on Aug 20, 2013 18:17:20 GMT -5
"from the years of paying his dues"
Tony Chimel: From Philadelphia, PA. Weighing in at 220 pounds. Bryan Danielson
"from being the jobber of the stars"
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan fighting John Cena at Velocity in 2003
"from trying to become the best here in the Wrestling Industry"
a clip is shown of an old Daniel Bryan talking about being released by the WWF In 2001
Daniel Bryan: I'm not a big fan of southern wrestling, but there's a lot of aspects. It's not my cup of tea but it's still wrestling nonetheless,
even clips are shown of Daniel Bryan fighting CM Punk at ROH 2004.
"wrestling in the most places in ring of honor and becoming the champion"
a clip is shown of Daniel Bryan with a microphone and the ROH Championship around his waist
Daniel Bryan: I have been ROH champion for over six months now, and as the ROH Champion, I can call my own shots. I will be a fighting champion,
another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan fighting Austin Aries by using a Triangle Choke
"overcoming the accolades"
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan kicking Dean Ambrose in the head.
"going to the future"
Daniel Bryan: the only way you can be a star, is where you can go someplace where you can truly love,
"coming to the major leagues"
A clip is shown of Daniel Bryan coming to NXT
Daniel Bryan: I'm from Aberdeen, WA. Theyr'e calling us rookies, but i've been wrestling for 10 years. This is the chance i've been waiting for. You can't help it that you have this opportunity, this is my biggest shot to accomplish my dreams
Clips are shown of Daniel Bryan's first WWE Match against World Heavyweight Champion Chris Jericho
another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan flying onto Chris Jericho:
Michael Cole: Look at the welt of the kidney area of Daniel Bryan
"from competing in the most challenges"
clip is shown of Daniel Bryan holding a keg
Michael Cole: I guarantee you this is the first time this goof has been anywhere near a keg, your'e doing great Daniel stick your tongue at me. It looks like he belongs on Dancing with The Stars.
another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan eliminated from NXT
"to his heartbroken defeat on NXT"
Matt Striker: Daniel, you have been eliminated from NXT. How bout an ovation from Daniel Bryan
another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan attacking Michael Cole
"that didn't stop him from overcoming his dreams"
Daniel Bryan: the truth is, I was eliminated by WWE Management. There's a couple of reasons, i heard about the politics and the nightmares. Vince Mcmahon loves big guys (Flashback clips are shown of Stone Cold Steve Austin raising the WWE Title Belt at Wrestlemania 14. The Rock staring down his opponents, Undertaker doing his kneel taunt at Unforgiven 1998. The Game raising his arms at Wrestlemania X7 from the top rope, John Cena winning the WWE Championship at Wrestlemania 21), I was a self made man, I was not invented by the WWE Machine. They need to pick guys who are the best people for this job and the best person for this job is me. all the pros know how good I am.
clips are shown of Michael Cole confronting Daniel Bryan
Daniel Bryan: You are by far the worst announcer in WWE history, from day one. WWE has been trying to hold me back. The Miz (flashback is shown of The Miz posing in the ring) by far was the worst pro,
Michael Cole: you know why i ripped you, you didn't deserve it. Your'e lacking one thing, your'e no longer in this competition. Look in the mirror one time, stop making excuses. It's not blaming The Miz. It's not blaming me and management, You talk about your'e the submission specialist, you tapped out of this competition. You tapped out Daniel Bryan because your'e a loser, because losers have no heart.
"letting the critics overcome his attitude"
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan choking Justin Roberts out with his tie on the NXT invasion on WWE RAW.
"exiled by his friends"
Wade Barrett: You will never see Daniel Bryan again
"back for redemption"
John Cena: we all have found a 7th member of team WWE. It's somebody that hates the nexus. The seventh member of Team WWE is Daniel Bryan
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan walking to the ring at Summerslam 2010 by making Darren Young tap out and performing a high-flying move on Heath Slater and also making him tap out.
"his success to overcome a former foe"
a clip is shown of Daniel Bryan shoving The Miz into Michael Cole
"humilation and abuse by his former pro"
another clip is shown of The Miz kicking Bryan in the face and shoving his face into the US Title Belt
Michael Cole: Daniel Bryan's got the personality of a prick and he deserves this.
The Miz: You will never have this.
"representing the country as the United States Champion"
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan making Miz tap to the lebell lock at Night of Champions and raising the US Title
Matt Striker: Congratulations Daniel Bryan, you join a long list of legends in our industry. Daniel Bryan is the New United States Champion
"never giving up on his dream"
a clip is shown of Daniel Bryan smiling with the US Title on his waist
Michael Cole: What A Nerd, This is a Joke, He is representing the WWE as The United States Champion
The Miz: That's what you want, the face of the company of the WWE.
"to earn his spot in the annals of the WWE"
Clips are shown of Daniel Bryan making his appearance at the 2011 Money in The Bank
Michael Cole: Even Nerds are allowed in the Money In The Bank Match
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan's highlights in that match.
Booker T: He has a hell of a chance.
another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan fighting his way through superstars to get the briefcase and getting the briefcase
Michael Cole: Daniel Bryan at the top of the ladder, you have got to be kidding me. Daniel Bryan with the biggest win of his career, Daniel Bryan is Mr. Money in The Bank.
Jerry Lawler: Daniel Bryan with that briefcase can challenge the World Champion anytime he wants.
Another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan making his announcement to cash in his briefcase
Daniel Bryan: I have dreamed of being the World Champion in the WWE since I was a little boy.
"his dreams were now realized"
clip is shown of Mark Henry destroying The Big Show and Daniel Bryan racing to the ring
Michael Cole: There's no way
a clip is shown of Daniel Bryan winning the World Title with Lillian Garcia making the announcement
Lillian Garcia: Here is your winner and the new World Heavyweight Champion, Daniel Bryan
Daniel Bryan: Thank you all for supporting me for the last 12 years, this is for you.
"earning the respect"
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan with AJ
"but wrongful times of being champion would pay a price"
a clip is shown of Big Show running through AJ with Daniel Bryan checking on her as well. Another clip is shown of Big Show attempting to attack Daniel Bryan with AJ stopping him.
Daniel Bryan: I am the World Heavyweight Champion, And I am a role model, let me ask you a question, while you were stuffing your faces with the flesh of murdered animals and drinking bottle after bottle of beer and soda. How many of you actually recycle. Let me tell you something. I recycle, I care about the environment, I care about future generations and I care about nature.
another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan and AJ together until a frame is shown of Wrestlemania with AJ kissing Daniel Bryan
Michael Cole: A good luck kiss from AJ to Daniel Bryan
another clip is shown of Sheamus winning the World Title against Daniel Bryan
"his dream of being champion ended in heartbreaking failure"
AJ Lee: Daniel, your'e a great wrestler and you are a great person. We are all here right now to support you
Daniel Bryan: You know it feels like they are mocking me, if they were supporting me, they would've chanted yes to The Rock (a clip is shown of The Rock raising his arm at Wrestlemania 28)
Daniel Bryan: 18 seconds, 18 seconds. I defeated 2 giants, I overcame 5 men and in 18 seconds at Wrestlemania. It was all flushed down the toilet, because you just had to have that kiss, that was the kiss of death. This is your fault. You ruined everything, You had to steal the spotlight. I will never let you ruin my life again.
Clips are shown of AJ crying, another clip is shown of Daniel Bryan bad-mouthing AJ
Daniel Bryan: I wish that I had never even met you, I wish that i asked you out, I never said yes. Actually I wish you were never born.
"but romance never stopped him"
a clip is shown of AJ kissing Daniel Bryan and watching Bryan slap the yes lock on CM Punk
Daniel Bryan: my entire life won't be right until i say this to myself, I don't want anything, except this, AJ will you marry me.
AJ Lee: Yes,
then the clip is shown of the wedding:
Slick: Well, i guess that says it all. By the power vested in me,
AJ Lee: Wait, I was saying yes to someone else.
Vince Mcmahon: It's a business proposal, allow me to introduce the new RAW general manager. AJ
Clips are also shown of AJ getting Daniel Bryan evaluated along with Kane
Dr. Shelby: Hello everyone, welcome to anger management. I'm Dr. Shelby
Daniel Bryan: I'm not like the rest of you losers, i'm fine. Couldn't be calmer.
a clip is shown of Kane walking into the room and terrifying people and him and Daniel Bryan going face-to-face
Daniel Bryan: I will not be intimidated by you.
a clip is shown of Daniel Bryan and Kane defeating The Primetime Players,
Michael Cole: Bryan and Kane are now the #1 Contenders for the Tag Team Titles.
then more clips are shown of Kane and Daniel Bryan winning the Tag Team Titles:
Kane and Daniel Bryan (both) I'm the Tag Team Champions,
more clips are shown of their team name to Team Hell No and overcoming tag teams
JBL: Dr. Shelby deserves an award
until The Shield beat Kane and Daniel Bryan at Extreme Rules and Daniel Bryan questions on being the weak link
Daniel Bryan: I am not the weak link,
"standing alone again"
clips are shown of Daniel Bryan embracing the "yes" chants
"trying to top his quest to become champion again"
another clip is a face-to-face staredown between Daniel Bryan and John Cena
John Cena: All you wanna do is put your body on the line as a way to say I believe in you as much as you believe in me, that's what the WWE is. It's not grabbing a spotlight. Choose their favorite star and put their hand infront of their face.
Daniel Bryan: for you this is just another Summerslam, but for me this is the biggest match of my life
clips are shown of the Summerslam Match with Triple H as the guest referee
Daniel Bryan: Your'e not a wrestler and you don't deserve it
more clips are shown of Daniel Bryan getting hit with an AA by John Cena but Bryan kicks out.
then more clips are shown of the match with Daniel Bryan hitting the knee and becoming the WWE Champion shaking hands with Cena.
JBL: Welcome to the era of Daniel Bryan, the beard is here
Michael Cole: Daniel Bryan untop of the world.
"but it was stolen by greed and justice"
A clip is shown of Randy Orton with his money in the bank briefcase
Michael Cole: Is Randy Orton going to ruin Daniel Bryan's moment.
then another clip is shown of Triple H hitting Daniel Bryan with the pedigree, then Randy Orton hands the briefcase to Triple H
Triple H: Ring It,
Michael Cole: Randy Orton is a seven-time champion
"now with a man on the hunt to become WWE Champion again, Daniel Bryan has worked hard and he's fought long and hard, but a new era is dawning in the WWE. What will happen for the rest of the WWE Universe"
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underjohngrohs
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Post by underjohngrohs on Aug 20, 2013 21:58:26 GMT -5
WWE ROSTER: Heel - Bold Face - Italic
AJ Lee (Divas Champion) Aksana Alberto Del Rio (World Heavyweight Champion) Alex Riley (commentator) Alicia Fox Antonio Cesaro Big E Langston Big Show Bo Dallas Booker T Brad Maddox Bray Wyatt Brie Bella Brock Lesnar Brodus Clay Camacho Cameron Christian Chris Jericho (inactive) Chris Masters CM Punk Cody Rhodes Curt Hawkins Curtis Axel (Intercontinental Champion) Damien Sandow Daniel Bryan Darren Young David Otunga Dean Ambrose (United States Champion) Dolph Ziggler Drew Mcintyre Epico Erick Rowan Eva Marie Evan Bourne (injured) Ezekiel Jackson (injured) Fandango The Great Khali Heath Slater Hornswoggle Hunico Jack Swagger JBL Jerry "The King" Lawler Jey Uso Jimmy Uso Jinder Mahal John Cena (injured) John Morrison Jojo Josh Matthews JTG Justin Gabriel Justin Roberts Kaitlyn Kane (inactive) Kofi Kingston Layla Lillian Garcia Luke Harper Mark Henry Michael Cole MVP The Miz Naomi Natalya Nikki Bella Paul Heyman Primo R-Truth Randy Orton (WWE Champion) Renee Young Rey Mysterio Rhyno Ricardo Rodriguez Rob Van Dam Roman Reigns (WWE Tag Team Champion) Rosa Mendes Ryback Santino Marella Seth Rollins (WWE Tag Team Champion) Sheamus (injured) Shelton Benjamin Sin Cara Summer Rae Tamina Snuka Ted Dibiase Tensai The Rock The Undertaker Theodore Long Titus O. Neil Tony Dawson Tony Chimel Triple H Tyson Kidd (injured) Vickie Guerrero Wade Barrett William Regal Yoshi Tatsu Zack Ryder Zeb Colter [/b]
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underjohngrohs
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Joined on: May 19, 2012 17:48:25 GMT -5
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Post by underjohngrohs on Aug 21, 2013 14:06:13 GMT -5
well Summerslam is over, and we have a new WWE Champion. But not the new WWE Champion you expected, At Summerslam. It was an intense battle between Daniel Bryan and John Cena. But in the end Daniel Bryan walked away with the WWE Championship. However after Daniel Bryan celebrated, Randy Orton came down and many thought that Bryan's moment would be ruined and it was proven right as Triple H turned his back on the WWE Universe by delivering a massive pedigree to Daniel Bryan and thus allowed Orton to cash in his money in the bank contract clause to get the win and become WWE Champion once again. Orton and The Game are here tonight, As a championship coronation will begin, Vince Mcmahon has informed that there's going to be a new era in the WWE and that simply is the Orton Era. Daniel Bryan is here too as well, What will he have to say about this.
also John Cena is here as well, Cena is regarded to make an announcement about his injury to the WWE Universe.
Bray Wyatt will also make his presence felt on RAW as well after his victory over Kane in a Ring of Fire Match.
And also AJ has a huge surprise for Dolph Ziggler, What is it going to be, we've heard rumors that AJ may take Dolph back but who knows,
RAW starts on USA at 8:00 o'clock,
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Post by ✖ AJ on Aug 21, 2013 15:49:48 GMT -5
Okay, the problem with this is that the formatting needs work to make it more appealing. Also, you're lacking punctuation and grammar and all of that. Not that anybody is perfect with it, but, you're putting things like "What will he have to say about this." with no question mark or anything. Just some constructive criticism. Good luck.
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underjohngrohs
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Joined on: May 19, 2012 17:48:25 GMT -5
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Post by underjohngrohs on Aug 24, 2013 21:13:49 GMT -5
Note: well when I said i didn't have the RAW results. I saved them on my wordpad. WWE RAW - August 19, 2013
RAW kicks off with Daniel Bryan and John Cena. Clips and Highlights are shown of that match with Daniel Bryan finally becoming the WWE Champion, then it changes to Daniel Bryan's time here in the ROH and the WWE. It shows the fireworks going off, then suddenly Randy Orton running to ringside with Michael Cole's voice saying is Randy Orton going to ruin Daniel Bryan's moment. Then it shows a clip of Triple H turning Daniel Bryan over to hit the pedigree on him and Triple H's voice is heard saying "ring it". What fades to Daniel Bryan becoming the WWE Champion goes to Randy Orton winning the WWE Championship with Triple H raising his hand. Then the screen fades to black
We cut to a shot of the live crowd on Monday Night RAW as Vince Mcmahon's music plays to a mixed reception as he comes out alongside his daughter Stephanie. Michael Cole. Jerry Lawler and JBL welcome us to Anaheim talking about the events of Summerslam. Vince enters the ring with Justin Roberts handing him the Microphone. Some chants of "You screwed Bryan" are heard.
Vince Mcmahon: Last Night at Summerslam. You all witnessed not one WWE Championship Match (fans cheer), but Two WWE Championship Matches (jeers ring out in the arena knowing what Vince said), At Summerslam. Daniel Bryan finally acheived his 14-year career and became the WWE Champion. But you see like i've been saying in real-life. I didn't want Daniel Bryan to be the WWE Champion. I wanted Daniel Bryan to be less the WWE Champion. Now you see there are stars on the roster that wanna be like Vince Mcmahon and there are others that don't wanna be like me.
some of the fans still chant "You screwed Bryan"
Vince Mcmahon: now Daniel Bryan I will admit fought his heart out last night. But a big credit to my son-in-law for calling the match right down the middle just like he said he would do. A lot of people said well Daniel Bryan is paying his dues and he deserves to be the WWE Champion. Well guess what I don't give a damn what you people want. Daniel Bryan is not WWE Championship material and he never will be. There may be others that are WWE Championship Material. But they are just not there yet. (fans begin to boo but Vince begins his trademark growl), SHUT UP!. Now allow me to introduce to you, The Chief Operative Officer of the WWE. Ladies and Gentlemen. He is one of the all-time greats in this business. He is the King of Kings. Triple H
Triple H's theme plays as he comes out to a 50/50 reaction. Some fans are cheering but others aren't. The Game enters the ring and gives his wife a kiss and his father-in-law a hug and a handshake as he takes Vince's microphone.
fans begin to chant "You sold out"
Triple H: As you can clearly see, There is a new era here in the WWE. and it's not the Yes Era. It's not the John Cena era. It most certainly ain't the Best in the World Era. It has been always one thing and it always will be. The Mcmahon-Helmsley Era. At Summerslam. I called the match down the middle and you see Daniel Bryan deserved to become WWE Champion. Everything he worked for for 14 years he wanted to prove that he wasn't a nerd. He wasn't a goof and a hyprocite. He wanted to be the best in the WWE. And he proved that last night when he beat John Cena. But you know sometimes you have to make business decisions. And what I wanted was to do the right thing and do what was right for business. You see Daniel Bryan came this far. A lot of superstars deserved an opportunity but not Daniel Bryan, it's what every WWE Superstar thrives to do. the only reason why Daniel Bryan is not the WWE Champion is because he's not Championship worthy, he comes out here week after week trying to enterain you fans 24/7 and I will admit he does a damn good job. I respect Daniel Bryan. But how did I feel this personally, Did you really think I wanted to throw Daniel Bryan's career away to get where he was and to overacheive. It hurt me personally to do that. You think I wanted to do it with the guy who is the new WWE Champion. No there is still bad blood. But I wanted to do it for business (fans chant "You Suck"). You see. Daniel, you don't have the guts and you are not worthy of leading the pride of becoming WWE Champion. Because you think everything is about you when it isn't and check your ego just like I do. It's not about me and the WWE Universe. You do what is right for business. And now. I would like to introduce to you. The Apex Predator. The Man who I taught everything he knows in Evolution. The Man who i've fought and had wars with. The Man who I may not like after he took out my family (Points to Vince and Stephanie). But I have a lot of respect for him. I give you your new WWE Champion. Randy Orton
Orton's music plays as he enters the arena to a mixed reception. Orton smirks as a lot of fans begin to boo him. Orton comes to the ring shaking hands with both Vince. Stephanie and Triple H as he picks up the microphone.
Randy Orton: I told you so. I told you that I would cash in this briefcase and here i am now and always will be the WWE Champion for the 10th time. The Apex Predator and the Viper of the WWE. And what you see in this ring today is a new future. And i'm proud to be part of it. You see. This Man (points to Triple H). When I came to the WWE. He taught me everything A to Z and I was proud to be in Evolution with him. Now sure we've had our battles and sure I took out the mother of his kids. But I'm not ashamed to say it Triple H and all the Mcmahons. I owe you, I'm proud to be here today with you guys as the WWE Champion. For 3 years. I tried to gain the respect of everyone here and where did it get me nowhere, You see it's always been about what you people want. You wanted your poster boy John Cena like always in the number one league but where was I. Nowhere to be found. And yet you wanted to beg for CM Punk to save you, Punk's reign as WWE Champion could've been mine. I could've been WWE Champion for a long time. But no. All this was it was about the WWE Universe. Not about me. It was about you fans doing what you chose to do for the WWE. You chose a guy like Daniel Bryan. You chose a 199-pound guy who does nothing for this business but to entertain you fans by saying "YES". Well you know what I said at Summerslam. I said "NO NO NO". Now you all say "YES" to me, and you will give me the respect I deserve. Daniel Bryan. Your reign as WWE Champion was less than four minutes. And now your'e ashamed of facing this brand new era. So Daniel. Like it or not, you will answer to us and that you have no choice.
Daniel Bryan's music then plays as the crowd gives him the biggest ovation ever as he says yes. Bryan stands untop of the entryway with a microphone in hand
Daniel Bryan: so let me guess this straight. Triple H. You didn't want me to become the WWE Champion because you didn't want me to embarass your children or your wife or your father-in-law. Well guess what your wish came true last night because this should've been the happiest moment of my life. But all four of you consipired together to make sure I didn't walk out of Los Angeles with the WWE Championship belt around my waist. But you know what. Tonight. Randy Orton, if you think your'e so smart. If you think your'e a man. Then Tonight. You put that WWE Championship on the line and I can win take it back from you again
Fans cheer at Daniel's announcement
Triple H: Whoa whoa whoa whoa, listen here you little punk. Like i said you don't have what it takes to become the WWE Champion. You can't face Randy Orton tonight. Because your'e going to screw yourself over and over again. Check your attitude pal because it ain't going to be any night.
Daniel Bryan: wow Hunter, when did you abuse your power. Ohhh I know you abused it last night when you screwed me just like your family are known to doing. Screw people out of the WWE. Hell I could've just packed my bags last night and just went to another company if I had to. You know Hunter. For 14 years, I have proven to be the wrestler I can always be, And if i'm not welcome here in the WWE. I can go back to ROH. I can start my own promotion. I can either go to some other else's show on television and say my piece there. But no, I'm staying here and I will not leave until i get a WWE Championship Match tonight. Randy Orton. You have what is mine and i'm going to take it. I know in my heart that I am still a champion and I am still a man at heart.
Orton begins quietly talking to HHH. Stephanie and Vince who don't agree with it but decide to do it.
Randy Orton: you want to make the same mistake again like you did last night, Guess what you got your match. It will be me and you for the WWE Championship, And what I did to you last night is nothing compared from what the beating i'm going to do to you tonight.
Daniel Bryan: I knew you would see the light for once Randy. Last Night. I beat a veteran in John Cena. I Know in my heart I can beat Cena. I Know in my heart I can beat you cause i've made you tap out and I can make you my bitch again tonight and become the WWE Champion once again. And to quote an old legend. If you want to see Daniel Bryan take Randy Orton's WWE Championship. Give me a "HELL YES".
fans start to chant "HELL YES"
Daniel stares down Randy doing the "YES" chant. The Commentators are also shocked about this huge hostile takeover Daniel Bryan has made. It will be Orton vs Bryan for the WWE Championship tonight. The Commentators talk about that John Cena will be here to address the WWE Universe about his injury. They also hype up The 6-Man Tag Team Match that is coming up next with RVD. Mark Henry and Big Show vs The Shield.
Match 1: Rob Van Dam. Big Show and Mark Henry vs The Shield A great match to kick off Monday Night RAW. Obviously some issues between these six cause of what happened at Summerslam. The Shield are in control of this match like always until RVD makes the hot tag to Show who is a house of fire. Show looks to get the win for his team by going for the chokeslam. But Reigns stops his momentum with a massive spear. RVD re-enters the ring and clotheslines Reigns and himself over the top rope. That allows Ambrose and Rollins to work on Show. But don't forget about Mark Henry. Henry enters the ring and both Henry and Show hit Ambrose and Rollins with their finishers. Show pins Rollins to get the victory. What a win for RVD. Show and Henry. RVD looks to get the United States Championship while Show and Henry look to regain the tag team championship. The Shield are in big trouble Winners: RVD. Big Show and Mark Henry
backstage. A limousine driver gets someone's bags and Ryback enters the parking lot
Ryback: You got a problem with me
Limousine Driver: No sir, you said you wanted to be on time
Ryback: I was going to be on time, but you are a lousy limousine driver. Get my bags. I said get my damn bags
Limousine Driver: Yes sir
Ryback: Now drop them on the floor.
The Limo Driver doesn't do as he's told so Ryback throws the Limousine Driver into the hood of the car. Ryback begins to laugh.
RAW takes a commercial break
a "did you know" Segment is shown showing that Summerslam was the most watched Television Show in History.
The Commentators talk about the Brock Lesnar/CM Punk match. Highlights are shown of that match.
RAW takes another commercial break
Match 2: Kaitlyn vs Layla a great matchup between two former friends. Remember it was Layla that cost Kaitlyn the Divas Championship. But Kaitlyn looks set for a measure of revenge. Kaitlyn puts her former friend away by hitting the spear. Winner: Kaitlyn
Backstage. John Cena comes out with his arm taped up as he prepares to make an announcement about his injury.
RAW returns with John Cena's music playing in the arena as the fans are on their feet. Cena enters the ring and does his usual pose entering the ring as he shows what happened to his arm. Cena gets in the ring and picks up the microphone. The Fans start a Let's go Cena/Cena sucks chant but he begins to speak.
John Cena: at Summerslam. Last Night. I fought Daniel Bryan for the WWE Championship in what people said was the greatest match ever. Daniel Bryan believe it or not gained the respect of each and every one of you. But that's not the way I wanted the match to be. I wanted it to be a classic. And it was. When I left the ring. I saw some people say "did you see that. Triple H handed the belt over to Randy Orton. When I heard Randy Orton's name announced as the WWE Champion. I felt livid and frustrated cause the man that just beat me for the WWE Championship is not standing here in Anaheim with the WWE Championship around his waist cause it was stolen by the powers of the Mcmahons. Triple H and Randy Orton because they said they did it for all of you. Well Newsflash guys. You don't do it for them. You do it for the WWE Universe and you do it for yourself. Now both Triple H and Randy Orton. I fought the both of you before. I've seen how the games you played. But never in my wildest dreams did I think what was going to happen last night. Everyone of you had a plan was to screw Daniel Bryan of the WWE Championship and you did a great job at doing it. Now. Another thing I want to make an announcement as many of you know as many of you could see on TV and as many of you can see on the titantron. I have a big grape on my elbow and that's why tonight. I have officially announced that I will be having surgery. The reason why I wanted this match at Summerslam is because I wanted to show the world that I was still healthy. I have no excuses for losing the WWE Championship. It's just that the better man won. And that's why I will be leaving the WWE for 4-6 months. But before I do. I want to call out the New WWE Champion. Randy Orton, I know your'e back here. I want you to come out here so I can look you in the eyes.
Cena gets his wish as Orton's music plays in the arena. Orton enters the ring with the WWE Championship belt. He comes to the ring with a microphone
Randy Orton: well well well if it ain't an injured John Cena. I'm glad to see you still here. You see John. I'm not like you. I don't quit. I don't do your five moves of doom. I do the things the way I like them. That's why at Summerslam. I cashed in Money In The Bank. You remember last year. John when you cashed in your contract and you failed to win the WWE Championship. I did the same thing because you didn't. You failed to cash in your opportunity last year. You are a disgrace to Money In The Bank and most of all you are a disgrace to the WWE Championship. That's why I took matters into my own hands. And Cena. I hope when you leave here tonight. I hope you have one of those TV's in your hotels or in your nursery homes and you get to watch me beat Daniel Bryan into oblivion. Beat Him til he's black and blue. Now as for you John. I certainly hope that you don't come back. Infact you shouldn't even belong in the WWE. You and I we've both been here for ten years. We've busted our asses to get where we are today. I won the World Heavyweight Title in 2004. And I thought I was going to be the face of the company. But no. You became the face of the company. You wanted to be the Hulk Hogan of the 80's. You wanted to be the Stone Cold Steve Austin of the 1990's. And you wanted to be the John Cena of the new millenium. Well guess what this is 2013. And you think you want to be the John Cena of the 2010's. Well think again. by the time 2020 comes. I will be the Randy Orton of the 2010's. I don't need ice-cream bars, cups, t-shirts or my own personal luxuries. I'm going to be me. It's always been about me John not you. You wanna know why I am the WWE Champion is because I defeated all my personal demons aside. I put them aside. I was divorced, suspended twice and through it all I've kept on going. I didn't need critics taking me down saying that i wasn't going to be the future of the WWE. Damn It, I am a future hall of famer. And in 50 years. You will tell your grandchildren exactly where you were when you saw me cash in my briefcase Last Night,
Cena begins to speak
John Cena: You know Randy, you could never be like me. You could never face The Rock twice at Wrestlemania. You and I we both won the WWE title for 10 times. We went through wars with each other. Teamed up with each other and no matter what you are still a whiny baby. And as far as your new era goes. I will come back stronger and sooner and crumble this new era, you better hope that you don't kiss the ass of all the entire Mcmahon Family. Because when I come back. I will become the WWE Champion once again. You better hope you get past Daniel Bryan and every WWE superstar. That is your only chance of immortality to stay the WWE Champion. Because when I return healthier than ever. I will be on your ass and I will become the WWE Champion once again.
Cena leaves the ring with his music playing but suddenly Orton spins him around and hits the RKO. Orton just hit a huge RKO to the Injured former Champion. Orton stares down at Cena and picks up a Steel Chair. The Commentators beg Orton not to do it. Orton then places the Chair on Cena's bruised shoulder. Orton lines up and kicks Cena in the arm with the chair untop of it. Cena begins to scream in pain. Officials. Referees and even Brad Maddox come out to check on Cena. Cena is just brutally destroyed by the new WWE Champion. Orton leaves the ring with a smile on his face looking at the damage he's just done.
back live on USA. a clip is shown of Randy Orton destroying John Cena just moments ago. Backstage. John Cena is being loaded up in the ambulance. then it shows The WWE Champion laughing at his carnage and destruction.
Match 3: Dolph Ziggler vs Antonio Cesaro w/Jack Swagger and Zeb Colter of course as usual. Zeb Colter goes on his speech about the people in Anaheim and the illegal immigrants. Ziggler and Cesaro have a great match. Cesaro shows some great moves against Ziggler. But Ziggler fights back and hits a zig-zag on Cesaro as he countered the Neutralizer. After the Match. AJ Lee's music plays as she comes out Winner: Dolph Ziggler
AJ Lee: Baby, I'm sorry. I'm sorry for everything. I'm sorry I cost you the World Heavyweight Championship. I'm sorry I treated you so badly. I didn't mean to. I mean. I want us to be back together again. I want us to be the couple we used to be. I want things to be the way they were. I mean I am the Divas Champion. And Baby. We can do it again. We can be Divas and World Heavyweight Champion. We can take on the world together. All I have to do Dolph is (AJ gets down on her knees and begs Dolph for forgiveness). Forgive Me. I love you.
Dolph picks up a mic
Dolph Ziggler: AJ. I want to say I said a lot of things about you. I mean your'e the reason I became World Heavyweight Champion. But even though you cost me the title. I'm willing to forget and forgive. So AJ. I do love you and I
Then suddenly. The Lights go out as Bray Wyatt's yelling voice is heard and as usual it shows the candle that Bray Wyatt is lighting as he says "Wer'e here". Then Bray Wyatt along with his men come out. Are they going to ruin this moment for Dolph and AJ. Bray sits in his rocking chair as his men enter the ring and Bray blows the light out as the lights return to normal. But as Ziggler looks at the two men. AJ sneaks up from behind and hits a low-blow on Ziggler and that allows Harper and Rowan to attack Ziggler. Harper and Rowan continue to beat on Ziggler as Wyatt enters the ring. It was a damn setup. AJ set up Dolph Ziggler. Wyatt picks up Ziggler and hits his finisher before he kisses him on the forehead. AJ begins to laugh at Dolph as Bray picks up the mic
Bray Wyatt: I told you all what was going to happen to Kane at Summerslam. I sent him to the bottomless pits of hell. And Now oh poor Dolphie. Now you will know what it's like to not ever turn your back on your brothers and sisters. Because I would never turn on this beautiful lady (Bray says as he puts a finger on AJ's face). You see you disrespected this nice little lady you think that you wanted to go out on your own by yourself and you didn't give her any satisfaction. Well this pretty little lady has come home and she knows what it's like to have a man at her master side. All of you people. I created you just like I created this little girl. But all you people wanna do is cheer for your favorite monsters. And that's why Kane is not going to come back but when he does. He is going to be on our side just like this little girl. She saw the light and now my mission is not over yet because my goal in life is to become the WWE or World Heavyweight Champion and I don't care who stops us. I am the Eater of Worlds. And anybody that gets in our way will be the same thing Kane experienced at Summerslam and all of you will follow the buzzards.
Bray and AJ engage in a kiss as the Commentators don't know what to make of this.
Backstage. Vince Mcmahon and Randy Orton are talking about the attack on John Cena
Vince Mcmahon: that's what I wanted from you Randy. That's what I wanted you to do last night and exactly what I wanted you to do to John Cena. Now tonight, I want you to do what you did last night and I want you to take Daniel Bryan out. Beat him until he's no more. Beat him until he is no longer WWE Championship material.
Randy Orton: tonight, not only am I going to beat Daniel Bryan so bad. I am going to kick him in the skull and I will make sure he joins John Cena.
backstage. Josh Matthews speaks with Brad Maddox
Josh Matthews: Brad. Can I get your comments on the WWE Title Match that is going to happen tonight at Summerslam.
Brad Maddox: Well Josh. I think Daniel Bryan showed us last night that he had what it takes to become the WWE Champion. Just like everybody in the WWE Universe has what it takes. That's why I think Daniel Bryan and Randy Orton for the WWE Championship should happen. Now I am the RAW GM and seeing that Vince Mcmahon has called this a new era. I have decided to bring back some stars and actually your'e going to see him in action next against Wade Barrett.
The Commentators discuss who this new superstar is
Match 4: Wade Barrett vs John Morrison what a surprise to see John Morrison back in the WWE. Morrison hasn't lot a lot of ring rust as we haven't seen him in the ring since November 2011. Of course Morrison shows off some of his high-flying moves against Barrett. The Match is now back in the favor of Barrett but Morrison counters Barrett's bareknuckle punch into the Parkour Kick. Morrison heads to the top and hits the Starship Pain on Barrett to get the pinfall victory. Winner: John Morrison
in the ring. Josh Matthews enters and begins to speak to John Morrison.
Josh Matthews: John Morrison, an impressive victory in your return here on Monday Night RAW, it seems like nobody hasn't forgotten you.
John Morrison: You know Josh it's great to be back in the WWE. It feels so good to return where everybody knows you. I mean there's been one thing missing since I left the WWE for two years. I wanted to come back healthier than ever. I've been the Intercontinental Champion. ECW Champion and Tag Team Champion. There's one thing I haven't gotten and that's becoming The World Champion. I've been making a name for myself here in the WWE. But I'm going to say this "The Guru of Greatness" is back and I ain't going nowhere baby.
Brad Maddox is watching on the monitor until Damien Sandow comes out.
Damien Sandow: Mr. Maddox, I demand another re-match against that little pretty boy punk Cody Rhodes tonight. Not only has he caused me trouble but he can't be stopped.
Brad Maddox: I'll tell you what. Damien. You deserve another re-match with Cody, But that ain't going to happen. You see i've booked you in a match. And tonight. I would love to see you step into the ring with the best in the world CM Punk.
Damien Sandow: Fine, but understand this Brad. I will teach CM Punk respect. Your'e welcome.
in another area. The Bella Twins are putting their makeup but theyr'e angry talking about Brie's loss to Natalya at Summerslam.
Nikki Bella: I Can't Believe Natalya's making this all about her now. I mean I thought we had that little bitch, but it turned out that she used one of her uncle and daddy's way out.
Brie Bella: Natalya is still such a loser.
Eva Marie walks into the picture and talks to Brie and Nikki
Eva Marie: Hey ladies, there's no need to talk about Natalya. I mean she's just a sleazy ho who is so ugly that her friends Naomi and Cameron had the right to beat her at Summerslam. I mean what gives her the right to think she's special than you. So I talked to Brad Maddox and he's offered me a 6-Diva Tag Team Match at Main Event with you guys and me vs Naomi. Cameron and Natalya.
Brie Bella: Oh Eva. Thanks
Nikki Bella: It's time we show those ladies who's the boss of Total Divas
RAW goes to a break
Match 5: CM Punk vs Damien Sandow well CM Punk is clearly angry after his loss over Brock Lesnar at Summerslam. Punk and Sandow fight an awesomely good match with Sandow gaining the upper hand on Punk. Punk does fight back and when it seems like Sandow wants to leave the ring. Cody Rhodes surprisingly comes down to ringside and brings Damien Sandow back in the ring. Punk then picks up Sandow and hits the GTS to get the win Winner: CM Punk
after the match. CM Punk begins to pick up the microphone
CM Punk: for anybody that didn't see Summerslam. You saw me take Brock Lesnar to the limit last night. I may have not been the victor. But I've proved my heart out to each and every one of you fans. And I'll be honest with each and every one of you. I know everyone's talking about what happened with Triple H. The Mcmahons and Randy Orton. But i'm not ready to go after them just yet. My personal feelings are still wanting to get Brock Lesnar. You see Brock. You didn't want to take the easy way out at Summerslam. You and I we took a lot of punishment. But I came back for more. And Nobody knows this whether I win or lose against you. I can prove to you that I can still kick your ass. So Brock. I know your'e not here but what do you say about this. How bout me and you fight one more time to see who the better man is. So what i suggest you do. Paul Heyman is come out here and say if i have my match or not.
Paul Heyman comes out alongside the Intercontinental Champion Curtis Axel.
Paul Heyman: i'm very glad to see you still here Punk. Because at Summerslam. You not only got beat by Brock Lesnar. But you got beat by Paul Heyman. And to make matters worse for you Punk. You could never ever beat Brock Lesnar and now you wanna humilate yourself again. You want to get hurt again by Brock Lesnar. Well I'm going to tell you this Punk. You want Brock Lesnar so bad. Well let me tell you something. Your'e not going to wrestle him Next Week. Your'e certainly not going to wrestle him at Night of Champions or at Battleground. But on October 27. 2013. You the WWE Universe will get to see the end of CM Punk. Because inside Hell in A Cell in Miami. You CM Punk will face Brock Lesnar inside Hell in A Cell.
CM Punk: Hell in A Cell. You got it Paul. And let me tell you something. I've been inside cages and I know how they hurt. Last Year. I stood untop of the cell with Ryback and many people thought I was going to fly off the Hell in A Cell. But No I didn't, you wanna know why cause I love to be in that Cell. People love to tame everyone's careers but On October 27. I'm going to tame Brock Lesnar once and for all.
Paul Heyman: Well seeing as you have two months to face my Beast. Let me give you a little demonstration on what you will be enduring for the rest of those two months.
Punk looks around the ring to get some of Axel and Heyman but wait a minute. An unknown man enters the ring but suddenly the fans recognize him. It's RHYNO. Rhyno gets in the ring and hits Punk with the gore. Rhyno is back and he just targeted the former WWE Champion. Heyman. Axel and Rhyno both stand dominant and proud over CM Punk. I can't believe Rhyno has returned to the WWE to get himself some of CM Punk.
RAW takes a break
a clip is shown of earlier tonight with Daniel Bryan invoking his re-match clause for the WWE Championship against Randy Orton and Randy Orton injuring John Cena's arm.
Josh Matthews interviews Daniel Bryan
Josh Matthews: Daniel Bryan. Your'e just 24 hours removed from Summerslam after what happened last night between you. Randy Orton. Triple H and John Cena. You said that you wanted another chance tonight.
Daniel Bryan: Josh, I wanted to prove to myself that I do belong here. Do you know how hard i've worked for this. I've worked my ass off for 14 years and all i hear is people saying "he's never going to make it to the big leagues" If I didn't make it to the Big Leagues. I would not be in this business. I would be flipping veggieburgers but i'm here and tonight. I am going to take back what is rightfully mine, it's not about being the poster boy here in the WWE. It's about working hard to get to the WWE. And tonight I will be the WWE Champion for the second time.
Match 6: Non-Title Match Alberto Del Rio vs Justin Gabriel a solid match between Gabriel and Del Rio. Gabriel has already been impressive but he's taking it to the World Champion Del Rio who fresh off just defeated Christian at Summerslam. Del Rio and Gabriel fight an awesome contest. Gabriel and Del Rio pull out all the stops in the contest but Gabriel is too much for Del Rio as Del Rio puts him away with the crossarmbreaker to get the victory. Winner: Alberto Del Rio
After the Match. Alberto Del Rio begins to celebrate his victory until Christian's music hits as he comes out with Ricardo Rodriquez. WHAT. Christian and Ricardo Rodriquez together.
Christian: Alberto, you look a little confused there. I mean I have a new friend with me, Yea. The Friend that you beat up on two weeks ago. You see you may have gotten over me at Summerslam. But I still want what is mine because i've waited 15 long years to get it and I want to be the World Heavyweight Champion so bad. So why don't we have a match this friday night on SMACKDOWN for that World Heavyweight Championship because I spoke with Vickie Guerrero and I told her that I demanded another re-match. And this friday. Del Rio. I am going to become the World Heavyweight Champion once again because that's how I roll.
Christian hands the mic to Ricardo Rodriquez
Ricardo Rodriquez: Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you your future World Heavyweight Champion. Christian
Del Rio looks on frustrated as he knows he has to defend the World Heavyweight Championship once again against Christian this friday night on SMACKDOWN!.
Backstage. Triple H is on his cell phone speaking to somebody
Triple H: Is everything in place. Because I need to make sure Daniel Bryan doesn't walk out of Anaheim the WWE Champion tonight.
Stephanie then walks to the room
Stephanie Mcmahon: Is he on his way here.
Triple H: Yea he's on his way right now.
A split-screen is shown of Daniel Bryan and Randy Orton walking backstage as the WWE Championship is on the line next.
An advertisement is shown of SMACKDOWN with Christian taking on Alberto Del Rio for the World Heavyweight Championship.
Match 7: WWE Championship Match Daniel Bryan vs Randy Orton well Daniel Bryan gets to do it all over again as he takes on Randy Orton for the WWE Championship here tonight on Monday Night RAW. What a hellacious 24 hours it's been for Daniel Bryan becoming WWE Champion only to have it stolen from him by Randy Orton. Bryan and Orton exchange blows to kick things off and this match is going to get really ugly. Orton gets the upper hand against Bryan. JBL mentions that he thinks that Randy Orton is going to be the future corporate champion. Orton and Bryan put on a great match with Bryan kicking out of Orton's rope DDT and Orton kicking out of a flying goat. Bryan sets Orton up and hits the running knee. The same knee he knocked John Cena out with but it's not enough as Orton kicks out. Orton fights back and hits the RKO on Bryan but Bryan kicks out of the RKO and this Crowd here in Anaheim is stunned. Orton sets up for another RKO but Bryan counters and hits the YES lock on Orton but here comes Triple H. Triple H enters the ring and turns Bryan around to go for the pedigree but Bryan catapults The Game into Randy Orton. Bryan then lays into Triple H with right hands and knocks Orton out of the ring with a dropkick. and The Shield come out. they enter the ring to attack Bryan. Bryan does his best to hold them off one by one but Reigns hits him with the spear. Then suddenly a noise is heard through the fans as Kevin Nash makes his way to the crowd. Nash enters the ring and it looks like he's seen enough of this. Nash gets in the ring and stares down both The Shield. Triple H and Randy Orton. Nash looks like he's going to help Daniel Bryan up but instead Nash knees him in the gut and hits the jacknife on Daniel Bryan. Nash. Triple H. The Shield and Orton look at the prone body of Daniel Bryan as Triple H does the DX taunt. The Game then picks up Bryan and The Shield hold Bryan up so Orton can get in his face as he presses the WWE Championship belt in his face saying that this is as close as he will ever get to this belt. Orton then hits another RKO on Bryan. Orton then pins Bryan but the Ref has called for the bell. So there's no point in Orton winning the match. The Game does a mock-referee count just like he did at Summerslam. The Game mockingly rings the bell as the commentators have disgust and pure hate over Triple H. The Final Image of RAW is shown with Vince Mcmahon coming out and raising hands with The Shield. Triple H. Nash and Orton. Winner by DQ: Daniel Bryan
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Post by snickelodeon on Aug 25, 2013 8:29:05 GMT -5
Some quick thoughts on your diary layout issues aside...
First thing that strikes me is that you put to much into your promos in my opinion, a lot of it is unnecessary just make the point you are trying to make and move on. The second thing is that your show is to similar to what is actually happening, what I mean by that is none of it seems original its like you watched Raw and said I could do this instead like with Orton taking out Cena. I may be wrong but there doesn't seem like any long term thought goes into the show. How do you get from point A to point B.
If I was you now I would stop and do some planning pick an event in the future I would go with WrestleMania 31 and I would plan the card in my head and then book to reach that target. Obviously things change as you go but at least you have an end goal. Doing this will also help you book other Pay per View events.
This review is not meant to sound negative just an opinion and friendly advice, I think given time and some thought you could produce some good original work, keep it up.
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Post by Elliot on Aug 27, 2013 10:23:12 GMT -5
My main issue with this is the length. The truth is, nobody will read through it. Usually when doing promos in diaries, a lot of us simply sum it up in a paragraph, occasionally throwing a direct quote in there between speech marks, if there's something you really want them to say directly. Look at other diaries such as my own, HEELryan's or HEYMAN's. Direct speech all the way through not only makes the post too long, but at the same time, you may not realise it, but the segments seem shorter than they would actually be on TV. With a simple paragraph, you don't really give any indication of how long the segment lasted.
Also, I think you need some kind of layout. Use colours, bold, italics, maybe even the tables if you want to organise your stuff, a bit like Dan does with his. All this makes the diary easier and more fun to read, whereas right now, it's almost like a chore to trawl through a wall of text half a page long. Hopefully you can look at some mother diaries, take some notes and improve this one you have, because with the right setup, it could easily be a success.
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