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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2012 2:31:53 GMT -5
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SCENE 001
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We open the night to see Triple H walking down a backstage hallway at an arena. He adjusts his tie and jacket, before he stops at a door, with a label that reads “McMahon’s Office”. He clears his throat before he knocks and opens the door.
Triple H: Hey Vince, I’ve go-…. Oh my god!
Hunter charges into the office to find blood thrown everywhere. He walks up to the motionless body of Vince McMahon, laying in a pool of blood, most of the damage centered on the head. Hunter leans over and checks for a pulse, before raising up, eyes wide.
Triple H: Oh my god… He’s dead…
Triple H frantically runs to the door, looking up and down the halls.
Triple H: Help! Help! Someone help! It’s Vince! He’s…. He’s dead….
As EMTs and other personnel flood the office, Hunter backs away from the room, running his hand through his hair, taking a shaky breath as he looks around in shock.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2012 2:32:55 GMT -5
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Post by MizTV on Nov 3, 2012 9:15:53 GMT -5
Wait. Who murdered McMahon?  ? |
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Post by y2yay on Nov 3, 2012 14:41:09 GMT -5
Wait. Who murdered McMahon? ? I think that's the whole point. This looks really intriguing, I'll be following. What's with "Hafiz Abdurehman" and "Justin Tyger" though? |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2012 3:32:56 GMT -5
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We fade open to an open room, full of tables, populated by nearly the entire WWE roster eating supper. We pan across the tables, seeing familiar faces as they eat and joke around. We settle on one table, where we see JTG, Justin Tyger, Kaitlyn, and Hafiz Abdurehman.
Tyger: Hey, anyone want the rest of these snow peas? I’m full.
Hafiz: Yeah dude, I’ll take them, I love snow peas!
Tyger slides his plate to Hafiz and puts his arm around Kaitlyn, as they all look at JTG, who continues telling a story. We pan to the next table, where Zack Ryder laughs, jokingly shoving Santino Marella
Ryder: No way bro! That’s crazy!
Marella: I swear it! I swear!
The two laugh as we pan to another table, where Daniel Bryan and Kane sit, in the middle of an intense conversation.
Kane: No, you’re wrong, I’m telling you, your beard is stupid!
Bryan: Shows what you know! The ladies love my beard!
Kane: Is that why you’re single?!
Bryan throws down his fork in disdain while Kane laughs, as we turn to a door, that slowly opens as a sadden and still shocked Triple H walks in. He stands in front of the room, not moving, as the room begins to notice his presence, quieting down as they can tell something is wrong. Randy Orton stands up from his table, walking up him concerned.
Orton: Hey man… What’s going on?
Triple H: I…. I…
Triple H stumbles on his words, taking a shaky breath as he runs his hand through his hair.
Triple H: I have some bad news guys…. Vince McMahon is dead…. Someone killed him…
A gasp of shock fills the room, as Orton stumbles back to his seat, placing his hand over his opened mouth. A scattered murmur cuts through the silence, before Kofi Kingston stands up.
Kingston: What…. What happened?
Triple H: I don’t know… I walked into his office and he was just laying there… There was blood everywhere… And his… His head… Was bashed in…
The crowd of WWE employees sit in quiet. The Miz stands up from his table, grabbing his things and starts a march towards the door, but is stopped by Triple H.
Triple H: Where are you going?!
Miz: I’m leaving! You think I’m going to stay here when there’s a murderer in the arena!? Screw that, I’m getting out of here!
Triple H: No, you’re not.
Miz: The hell I’m not!
Triple H: Sit down! No one is leaving this arena until we find out who did this!
Miz: You can’t keep me here! I had nothing to do with this!
Miz tries to leave, but is again blocked by Triple H. The two start a tussle, until CM Punk runs up to them, pulling them apart.
Punk: Would you stop?! We don’t need this right now! Sit your ass down, Miz!
Miz stares at Punk, before he angrily walks back to his table, sitting down with force. Punk shakes his head, before looking at Triple H.
Punk: What do we need to do to help?
Triple H: I… I don’t know…. Is everyone here?
Punk looks around the room, looking across the sea of faces.
Punk: Yeah, I think s-…
Sheamus: Wait a minute, where’s Cena?
Sheamus stands up, looking around, as Punk looks across the room again.
Punk: John?…. John!
When no answer is heard, Punk looks back at Triple H.
Punk: I’m sure he’s somewhere, probably just in the bathroom, but other than that everyone’s here.
Triple H: Alright… I… I guess I just need to talk to everyone, I don’t know… We need to get to the bottom of this.
Triple H walks away, as the crowd sits solemnly at their tables, no one eating or talking.
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Post by DTP. on Nov 4, 2012 22:37:04 GMT -5
Awesome start, certainly grabbed my attention. Some of the dialogue was very accurate, especially the Kane and Daniel Bryan conversation. The only gripe I had was how rushed the Miz/HHH argument was. I think it was all a bit too sudden, and could've been paced out a little more than "oh, someone killed Vince, I'm outta here". If Miz had slyly tried to leave, I'd have been fine with that as it seems more fitting to his character. But nonetheless, I'm interested in more of this. Nobody's ever really completed one of these horror/mystery/whodunnit diaries, so I'm definitely liking the looks of this.
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Post by Planktung on Nov 4, 2012 23:21:44 GMT -5
Sin Cara, you saw the killer?! Which way did he go?!  |
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Post by Zeke on Nov 5, 2012 11:22:48 GMT -5
This is so interesting, I have a feeling Cena is the next killed.  |
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Post by Elliot on Nov 5, 2012 12:09:36 GMT -5
I adore these diaries, so I hope you continue this one. Really intrigued already.
Although you should probably check through the second update... it says "Cena" instead of "Sheamus" when he's looking for Cena, haha.
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Post by MizTV on Nov 5, 2012 17:50:08 GMT -5
Calling it now Jinder Mahal did it
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Post by Zeke on Nov 6, 2012 17:42:59 GMT -5
I reckon it was Jim Ross?
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Post by Johnny Wrestling on Nov 19, 2012 15:53:43 GMT -5
HHH did it!
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Post by dbdanielson on Nov 19, 2012 16:16:26 GMT -5
Dixie Carter obviously did it.
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