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Post by wwextreme25 on Apr 10, 2012 4:49:12 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300]Welcome everybody to the pre-show of Animania the TENTH anniversary. This should be a slobber knocker J.R and tonight is the night to prove, who has what it takes, to make it to the top. Days before Animania X who will emerge victorious.[/shadow] Jack vs Zack 'Which one of these men, will come out on top!'Zack -  Jack -  How to vote on matches: No polls and no suckish replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. (Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. Compare other's animation is recommended) If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10 (or 5 if you must), but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. voting ends in 48 hours |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 4:49:46 GMT -5
FIRST
#Youtube commenter
I'll edit haha
Edit: Zack: Not to bad, but it was a bit choppy and floaty for you. However It had a nice impact and wasn't stiff. I saw some string, but doesn't worry me. But I dislike how he didn't touch his feet properly and how it looked awkward in mid air
Jack: Awesome, It had a good takeoff and the whole animation was really smooth. Looked just like a Dykstra leg drop, however I feel he let go of his feet to quick and transitioned to quick. Very nice.
Vote: Jack
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 4:57:32 GMT -5
What a great way to start AniMania! With a good match Zack: It was smooth, but floaty and incredibly stiff, I liked the reaction, the camera was a bit shaky as was Paul London, the animation just sorta looks, ugly  Jack: It was really nice, Kenny didn't look stiff, which is great, it had a nice realistic reaction, the camera stayed nice and still, really nice looking animation, keep it up Jack. Vote: Jack |
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Post by wwextreme25 on Apr 10, 2012 5:10:56 GMT -5
good match guys.
Zack - not a bad animation, however the main problem i have here is it looks abit floaty. Like it was nice to see you attempting to bend the joints, but it was slow in the first bit causing it to look floaty. Then after you went into the actually impacted legdrop, it got choppy. I think that maybe you had to delete frames/got lazy i dunno. Reaction was merh but as a whole it wasnt that bad. you put effort into it and it shows. 7/10
jack - great animation. I liked the speed of the animation, had a good, rhythm to it let's say. The joint movement was nice but coming down into the actual impact it lookeda tad stiff. However, i liked the impact and the move as a whole was one of your best animations to date. good job 8/10
vote jack
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Post by wweanimation09 on Apr 10, 2012 5:28:57 GMT -5
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Post by jdp on Apr 10, 2012 6:06:27 GMT -5
Zack: Nice One, Rust Is Kinda Wearing Off But I Could Still See Some Choppyness And Some String. 7-10
Jack:Great Job,Saw Some Figdty Points, But Other Wise Nice Job 7.8-10
Vote Very Good Match, Jack Gets My Vote Sorry Zack
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Post by jake4698 on Apr 10, 2012 6:15:42 GMT -5
Zack : A meh animation, i'm really disapointed. It didn't flow that good and it was kinda choppy. It was a slightly stiff, and the camera was a bit shaky. Not to mention that the animating space isn't that great and that lighting isn't good.
Overall : 7.25/10.
Jack : Amazing animation. I'm really surprised of what you've done! Really great work. It flowed so damn well, and it was so smooth. It was really realistic as well. It nearly didn't have a flaw. Sandman's reaction looks pretty impactfull and painfull. Decent lighting and animating background (space). Wire wasn't seen too, so nicely done.
Overall : 8.5/10.
I vote for Jack.
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Post by 0,Y on Apr 10, 2012 6:38:31 GMT -5
Great opening match!
Zack:
nice ani. It was smooth, the squat before the jump looked good. Reaction was great, a tad bit too fast though.
Main problem was stiffness. I don't know what it is but something is really off in your animation.
I think it's the background and the cardbord box which make your ani look kinda dirty :/
Jack:
another good ani from you but not your best.
As always it was pretty smooth, the squat before the jump looked good in your animation aswell. Impact and rope bounce were perfect, Sandmans reaction was kinda meh. It wasn't too stiff.
Vote: Jack, as it looked more professional and it wasn't as
stiff as Zacks.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 6:42:53 GMT -5
Zack: Your Taunts always looks like the same (just sayin xD) The Jump was smooth but a bit stiff in the air time. London was all the time stiff that makes the ani not that good. good reaction overall: 6/10 Jack: It had a nice amount of pictures, i really like the jump and the whole animation the air time wasnt stiff, always smooth and the reaction was good too  overall: 8,5/10 Vote: Jack |
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Post by Adam on Apr 10, 2012 7:17:01 GMT -5
Zack- Not bad. the leg drop should of had MVP bend his knees instead of just moving his arms back but i like the taunt youy added at the start.
it started off smooth but then it seemed to go really choppy like you missed 5 frames or something?
The reaction seemed pretty good for what it was.
Jack- i think dykstra should have bent his knees a bit before the jump but it still looks pretty good.
Was smooth through out the whole animation, good speed and wasnt very stiff.
i also saw no string and the rope bounce was good.
The reaction was alright i think it should have been a bit bigger.
Great work Jack.
Vote- Jack
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Zack isnt my real name :P How many backflips and frontflips did Paul London do? ;D
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Post by Zack on Apr 10, 2012 7:18:31 GMT -5
Jack, You won the match this time man, great job C:
Great Job on the animation, very smooth and looks realistic. However, I think if Kenny had jumped a little higher would have made it more realistic. Love the way you moved his arms up but he was kind of stiff after the move. The reaction isnt really good too. But I like how you made the ropes bounce, great job, 8/10!
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Post by ncw on Apr 10, 2012 8:45:12 GMT -5
Jack: Good lighting, pretty smooth and solid leg and arm movements, the reaction seemed too delayed and a bit off imo, I would have liked to have seen the leg movement more exaggerated when coming down but solid animation here. Rating: 7.1/10
Zack: I liked the little taunt to begin with. These are good because it lets the viewer grasp whats going on to start with. I loved the exaggerated leg movement going backwards, I little choppy coming down but the reaction was good and suitable for the move. Rating: 7.3/10
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Post by Mezzo Can Dig It! on Apr 10, 2012 9:03:54 GMT -5
Jack: Nice animation! It was smooth, the lightning was good, but I kinda missed a reaction... Also it was pretty basic.
Zack: Great job bro! The reaction was great, the lightning was and the taunt in the beginning was great too!
Ratings:
Creativity:
-Zack: 10/10
-Jack: 2/10
Lightning:
-Zack: 10/10
-Jack: 10/10
Animation:
-Zack: 9/10
-Jack: 10/10
Overall:
-Zack: 9,6
-Jack: 7,3
SICK! I'm impressed by both of you!
Jack: I'm sorry, but I couldn't give you a higher rate.
The ani was perfect, just not "creative" enough. :/
My vote: Zack
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Apr 10, 2012 13:07:07 GMT -5
My vote for this one goes to Jack
Zack: The jump at the beginning was somewhat smooth but it looked a bit floaty in mid air also
You could have bent the leg joints a little more to make the leg drop have more impact as well and it
was a little slow. The impact was very nice but it got just a tiny bit choppy and I like Paul's reaction. 7.7/10
Jack: The jump was really good and it was very smooth, the movements were very realistic in mid air
and there was no choppy, floaty or fidgetiness to be seen although it was just a little stiff going into the
impact. I like the amount of impact there was but Sandman maybe could have sold it a little more,
regardless great animation. 9.0/10
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 14:15:11 GMT -5
My vote to Jack
Zack camera shook it was a bit choppyand I dont like how MVP froze in the air also you didnt use a ring overall 6 out of 10
Jack the only thing I really have to say about that is Kenny was a bit stiff on the landing ovverall 8.9 out of 10
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Post by wwestevo07 on Apr 10, 2012 18:16:08 GMT -5
Zack: I liked the little taunt at the start. The start of the jump was decent, when mvp was in the air it looked like he slowed down a bit too much mid air before he landed the leg drop. I liked the reaction by London. Pretty decent impact. Camera was shaky but not too noticeable. The animation over looked pretty smooth. After both figures are down i would take the string off the them, imo it makes the animation look a bit bad when u see string hanging from the figs at the end.
Jack: Your ani looked alot cleaner. Was smooth and flowed well. I liked how u had sandman move a little before kenny jumped, i like little details like that. The legdrop looked good but a i feel u could have moved kenny's joints a little more going down like moving his arms down before he landed. Reaction and impact looked pretty good.
Vote: Jack
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Post by NEW™ on Apr 10, 2012 22:23:51 GMT -5
Its been a while since I have did this, but I am going to give this a shot.
Zack: This wasn't that bad of an animation. It has shown improvement since the last time I have seen your anis. Anyways, it seemed very smooth throughout it, and I especially liked the pull back of the leg drop, because a lot of animators seem to leave it out. Loved the taunt in the beginning, it is essential to what the animation needs. Now, Paul was quite fidgety during this whole legdrop part of it. Also, Paul was moving, but not realistically. I saw bits of string during the jump, but not very much. No shadows or hands, and no floatiness. It wasn't extremely stiff, so I liked it a lot. Now, to the camera, it was nice and clear, and the angle was good, but the camera shook here and there, which I have to take a point off because of that. You need to make sure that the camera is not way too shaky, or it will hurt the animation. Now, when MVP hit the leg drop and the angle changed a bit, that is just fine. Also, the squat before the jump was great, which was also a nice addition to it. The reaction was alright, maybe show a little more pain because he just fricking leg dropped him in the neck. lol. Impact seemed pretty good suggesting the way he landed. Nice!
OVERALL: 6/10
Jack: This seemed like a throw at you animation, not a lot, not too little. I liked that you had him squat, but it was a little too quick. Zack's had a bit more of pictures that were added to it. But, the flow seemed nice althrough the animation. The moving of the joints was fluid, and the impact from the ropes to the bounce was pretty adequate. No shadows, string, or hands, which surprised me a bit because you see any of those in an animation. I like how you had Sandman moving, but it was again, not realistic. He wasn't moving his arms or legs, so maybe try to incorporate that while you are doing it. There needs to be more of a jump, and the reaction was okay, but needs a tiny more work. Now, what really surprised me was the camera. Usually, most cameras are shaky a little bit, but yours was spot on. I didn't see it move a centimeter. Also, no blurriness and the lighting was perfection. Angle was great by the way. I think Zack beat you though with realism. Although, we will see with the overalls.
OVERALL: 6.5/10
WINNER: Jack
Good match you guys. Would kill to see this one again. Zack, what killed you was the camera shaking. I know it is hard, but you will get the hang of it.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 23:44:14 GMT -5
I don't know Mezzo, but how is jumping off a box creative?
Zack- smooth, a bit fidgety and stiff. saw some strings,
and the camera was a bit shaky.. which distracted me.
Jack- Very nice animation from you man, smooth.
and stuff like that, i would say take more pictures on the fall
and bend the figures more..
Vote- Jack
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