Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jan 11, 2010 22:04:53 GMT -5
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Post by Scotty on Jan 12, 2010 19:39:54 GMT -5
Good- smooth, ok reaction, not choppy or stiff,
bad- shaky, saw string
8.5/10
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Post by jonirocks on Jan 13, 2010 4:10:30 GMT -5
i think u ether need a biger ring or difrent angle
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Post by Sabin on Jan 13, 2010 15:58:26 GMT -5
i think you need to comment on the animation douche.
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Post by 67jinky67 on Jan 13, 2010 16:38:52 GMT -5
There didn't seem to be any momentum in the preperation for the jump.
The jump was ok,it was a bit choopy in the spin,and it's pretty stiff.
John Morrisons reaction was pretty good,but Brians was pretty delayed.
Pretty decent.
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DB
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Post by DB on Jan 13, 2010 16:39:18 GMT -5
i think you need to comment on the animation douche. That guy never comments on the animation. all he cares about is the size of our ring which is quite stupid because it doesnt matter what u animate on, this thread was made for an animation not to comment on the ring. Anyways the animation was quite good. it flowed well in some parts. when he was doing the twist, i think u could have added more frames. the impact wa ok and the reacton is decent. overall it was an ok animation. 7/10 |
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Post by Sabin on Jan 13, 2010 16:48:00 GMT -5
Thanks for the advice db and for the comment jinky.
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Post by Sabin on Jan 14, 2010 18:41:43 GMT -5
added a new animation.
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Post by axelwarjp on Jan 14, 2010 18:59:20 GMT -5
I think I saw this in that Killa channel.
It's decent. I don't like the shakyness. I say string. I saw a 'jump' but I think it needs a few more frames. You had Paul bend the whole time, you should have his chest bend out during the flip. Good reaction though again, don't like the camera moving.
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Post by Sabin on Jan 15, 2010 15:19:46 GMT -5
ok thanks for the comment lks, some more comments please? heres some fail for ya  |
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Post by DB on Jan 15, 2010 16:25:35 GMT -5
It was a nice ani. there was sort of a jump. i dont like how london was kinda sideways in the air. the reaction was good but i dont like how they are almost out of view. 7/10
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Post by hwf on Jan 16, 2010 9:38:57 GMT -5
its good, but i can see string and its shaky, 7/10
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Post by Sabin on Jan 16, 2010 15:11:54 GMT -5
how bout an actual comment? not that 8 word bullcrap.
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Post by Dan. on Jan 16, 2010 15:19:48 GMT -5
^^^^^ I dont even see how these people can comment in 8 words tbh. They can hardly be classed as comments at all. This animation is not the best, but i like it for some reason ;D The jump is a little too fast to notice tbh, i saw string but thats just a little downfall. The general in-air action was stiff, and there was one bit where paul turned a way he shouldn't have. The impact was good but it did lack a reaction. The camera is also shaky and the camera angle change was odd but that cant be helped if your tripod sucks. Although that sounds negative, I really do like the animation, but when i pull it apart it doesnt sound as good as it is. Well done anyway  |
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