Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Apr 19, 2011 1:53:53 GMT -5
Hey guys! I figured that I would try out this NWA show and I love the storylines I made. Please reply as I have for your shows. I think the show turned out fine except for a few blurry photos. Please pass this show around, thanks. Click the link below to see my show and keep clicking next and on the last segment there will be a WFigs logo for you to click to reply to this!  |
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StingerSplash
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Give em' the Scorpion Death Drop.
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Post by StingerSplash on Apr 19, 2011 6:14:48 GMT -5
Good to see this up Ben!
First thing I notice, are that the pics are too large. It's kind've hard to take it all in, you know? I'd also leave some more space between the pics and the commentary. There were several times where I stumbled trying to find it.
Cosmetically, your arena looks pretty good. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe making more of an entrance way. Maybe just a simple stage.
Nice little intro promo with Rhodes/Kingston. Thought it could have been a little bit longer, but I liked how you're starting the feud between those two.
Good match with Umaga/Jordan. Saw some string in one pic during the hurricanrana. Other than that, it was a pretty good match.
Batista with Rhodes? Sounds good.
Nice match with the Old/Young teams. Saw some string in that one as well.
The main event went wayyy too quick. Even if you were going to finish the match that way, I would have had it went a while longer. And, the Cross Rhodes doesn't go like 6 feet in the air. lol. But I do like this feud you're developing with Rhodes/Kingston. I'll be interested to see how it plays out.
Overall, pretty good first show. I'd add some more promos from other members of the roster on the next show. Plus, several pics were blurry, so probably try and make them a little clearer. You can tell you put effort into this show, and I can only see it getting better from here.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 19, 2011 7:23:18 GMT -5
I liked it Ben, this was in my opinion the best show you have done so far. My only critiques would be that you didnt do enought ot seperate this from looking exactly like your other shows, ie arena wise. Ans please if its an nwa show turn tthe wwf wrstlemania 2 sig on the ring away form teh camera. Other than that your poses are getting better and the storylines were good for a first show. Stick with this one Ben and lets see where it goes.
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Apr 19, 2011 10:32:35 GMT -5
Thanks StingerSplash and John for replying. I liked making this show.  I had to upload it to photobucket twice!!! That was a real pain but I got over it. The string was shown because I didn't edit at all. :/ The few blurry pictures were because I have a broken tripod and I don't have the money to replace it at the moment. For the next show I will have promo's though. My promo's will be edited using Pinnacle Studio Pro v.14! I hope everyone enjoys the next show as much as I enjoy making these.  |
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thekaniac
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Post by thekaniac on Apr 19, 2011 14:30:39 GMT -5
That was awesome man really enjoyed it make ALOT more for my selfish benefit lol
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Post by Turnbuckle Zealot(Phil) on Apr 23, 2011 1:11:45 GMT -5
I like Rhodes as a the cocky Flair esque current champion. If you were a real promoter having Kofi and rhodes as a true face/heel rivaly going is a classic formula that few would argue with both for entertainment and for business. I like that. I liked Umage vs Jordan which had some good poses and "Wrestling's Finest" Is a heel faction that I would love to see more of only thing I have to say as a helpful critict note is Angle wouldn't get rolled that quickly by a level 7 as I call it mid carder. Billed as a lucky pin though I get it. and I'd reccomend trying something different as far as goin through the rope poses possibly get some super thin string and make just hold the extended leg and around the neck and do some editing work on it. I'm pretty sure there is something in the pic fed FAQ as far as editing out string from photos. But yes push the faction and have them achieve horsemen like control in the promotion. other than that I solid first show I give a solid 7/10 and am ready to see more! Keep it up!
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on Apr 23, 2011 1:22:07 GMT -5
I like Rhodes as a the cocky Flair esque current champion. If you were a real promoter having Kofi and rhodes as a true face/heel rivaly going is a classic formula that few would argue with both for entertainment and for business. I like that. I liked Umage vs Jordan which had some good poses and "Wrestling's Finest" Is a heel faction that I would love to see more of only thing I have to say as a helpful critict note is Angle wouldn't get rolled that quickly by a level 7 as I call it mid carder. Billed as a lucky pin though I get it. and I'd reccomend trying something different as far as goin through the rope poses possibly get some super thin string and make just hold the extended leg and around the neck and do some editing work on it. I'm pretty sure there is something in the pic fed FAQ as far as editing out string from photos. But yes push the faction and have them achieve horsemen like control in the promotion. other than that I solid first show I give a solid 7/10 and am ready to see more! Keep it up! Episode 2 is up and I am currently working on NWA Clash of Champions 2011!  |
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Mr.Amazing
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Post by Mr.Amazing on Apr 23, 2011 22:07:39 GMT -5
this is a great first show, I like Cody Rhodes as champ.
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tirva
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Post by tirva on May 19, 2011 13:06:48 GMT -5
This is the first of any work i think i've saw from you. I'll be checking out your other episode next. Here's my help. I like Rhodes as champ, Umaga as a monster, Batista in the bodyguard role and all but the 6-man tag didn't make sense to just have those guys sit on the apron. Try editing the string. Where's everyone's knee pads? First show are so hard to start with anyway but i'm really looking to see how the second show is because i know it'll be a big improvement. Don't be afraid to get creative and write good promos (interviews) for guys. That's how we learn about their characters. Not a bad first show dude!
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Post by Robert69 on May 31, 2011 22:33:42 GMT -5
It was a decent first show. Same as most anyone else said. String was visible, some of the poses were a bit awkward but overall, entertaining. I like the roles you've chosen for everyone introduced thus far. Look forward to reading your next episodes.
6/10
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