Wweuniverse4787 vs OweInc!

my vote is for wweuniverse, oweincs was too stiff, the arms never moved, also wweuniverse had a better reaction.
wweuniverse: u should have bent his back more in while he was in the air, but still the ani was alright, i give it a 6.5/10
oweinc: good lighting and no blurry pics, but it was just to stiff. i'd say a 5/10
good job tho guys

Wweuniverse4787:
The ring slides around. I saw a hand shadow on wall. And string. I like that you made Jeff walk to top. I think you should have tried to make it look like he was climbing to top. I don't like the camera change on impact. Jeff needs to jump. Background pillows ws distracting. During swanton, it looked like he went, then in one spot in mid air he flew and did roll then went down for impact. He should be moving down while rolling. Cody was stiff whole time. I saw arm on top. Fell's reaction after hitting Cody was fast. I felt like Cody's reaction was late.

OweInc:
The whole set up is...too bright! White walls with white ropes does not work. I like how you have Umaga moving at beginning, I wish he was moving during swanton too though. The jumping to top rope look a bit unrealistic but it was smooth. It needs a jump up too. I saw string and a finger. I hate camera moving up close. Needs more of a reaction.

Vote: OweInc

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wweuniverse4787- I liked how you animated Hardy climbing up the turnbuckle. Most animators get lazy and leave that out. There were some arm shadows on the wall. To fix that I suggest a longer piece of string. The taunt before he does the Swanton was a nice add. He needs to have more of a "spring". Like before he flips, make him look like he's actually gonna flip instead of just putting him in the air out of nowhere. Cody was stiff on the floor and had no reaction when Hardy was about to land on him. To fix this, I suggest making him look scared or frightened when people are about to land. Maybe you could move his arms a bit. The flip was stiff. To fix this, you gotta move the arms and legs. Maybe you could watch the person's actual move on YouTube and see how they actually move. The flip was also blurry. To fix this, you can't take the pic while the figure is still moving. Try the self timer on your camera. Impact was okay, but I didn't like the sudden camera movements. Rhodes' reaction was pretty good but he moved a bit. Jeff's reaction was lacking. Again, you could look how Jeff actually reacts to a Swanton on YouTube and get reference from there. Score- 8.3/10

OWEinc- When I pressed play, my eyes hurt. Your set up is too bright. Maybe you could try a different rope color or ring mat. The taunts by the guy who does the Swanton were good. (Let's just call that guy "Bob") The type of figure that Bob is is not a good type of figure for animating since that type of figure's articulations are limited. I suggest using a different figure like a Mattel, or an RA Jakks. When he was climbing up, he wasn't really walking. It was more of a slide. I think that's because of the limited articulation on the figure you used. I saw some shadows on the wall while he was climbing up, and some string. For the shadows, use a longer piece of string. For the string, use editing programs such as Photefiltre or Gimp. Bob didn't really show a "spring". Again, this is because of the articulation of Bob. He was stiff in the air. Another articulation problem. He was also fidgety in the air. To fix this, you can't take the picture if the figure is still moving. Use the self timer on your camera. Bob landed on Umaga's legs, which was weird. Umaga's reactions lacked, and so did Bobs. You have to move the figures more. If you don't, it will look a bit unrealistic. Score- 7.8/10

Vote- wweuniverse4787 This brings the score to: wweuniverse4787- 4 and OWEinc- 1

Oh, didn't even know. Sorry about that .

vote:wweuniverse4787

OWEinc: your animation is brighter and i dont saw the string but the swanton bomb didnt look so great 8/10

wweuniverse4787:i saw the strings,shadows and hand, but the swanton bomb was great 9/10